I seem to be playing a human that happens to be named "gun." The other characters seem to be humans named after various gun brands and types. And it feels very, very slow paced. As a visual novel, it seems to be well-implemented, but that's it.
Hi, appreciate the feedback, just wanted to clarify when you mentioned slow is this something we could improve with the dialogue writing speed or just narrative flow in general? Other than that aspect were there any other areas we could improve?
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I seem to be playing a human that happens to be named "gun." The other characters seem to be humans named after various gun brands and types. And it feels very, very slow paced. As a visual novel, it seems to be well-implemented, but that's it.
Hi, appreciate the feedback, just wanted to clarify when you mentioned slow is this something we could improve with the dialogue writing speed or just narrative flow in general? Other than that aspect were there any other areas we could improve?